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Dinner
Dec 30, 2004 16:13:08 GMT -5
Post by Jeffrey on Dec 30, 2004 16:13:08 GMT -5
(Maybe he was the first person that knocked. Then he got afraid and came back. That's more to write, but it'd make sense...)
"I could irreparably change the future. For better or worse, it wouldn't matter to me. I could just fix it and save you the agony. It'll have been worth it."
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Dinner
Jan 3, 2005 16:15:46 GMT -5
Post by Vivian Astley on Jan 3, 2005 16:15:46 GMT -5
"Maybe....or maybe you'd just make it worse."
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Dinner
Jan 3, 2005 16:23:39 GMT -5
Post by Jeffrey on Jan 3, 2005 16:23:39 GMT -5
"How can it be any fucking worse?"
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Jan 3, 2005 16:30:54 GMT -5
Post by Vivian Astley on Jan 3, 2005 16:30:54 GMT -5
She bit her lip. "I don't know."
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Jan 3, 2005 16:37:22 GMT -5
Post by Jeffrey on Jan 3, 2005 16:37:22 GMT -5
(Do you wanna try and knock at the door when they're going at it? Cuz that might just be what sends Zack over the edge instead of all that other complicated stuff. Viv's come to terms as best as she can and is calmly shoving it out of her mind, but Zack can't deal because he chickened out...)
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Dinner
Jan 3, 2005 16:47:58 GMT -5
Post by Vivian Astley on Jan 3, 2005 16:47:58 GMT -5
(works for me but once again thats gonna be all you.)
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Jan 3, 2005 17:01:28 GMT -5
Post by Jeffrey on Jan 3, 2005 17:01:28 GMT -5
(He doesn't have a time turner. He wishes he had a time turner. Viv's gonna go back with him to make sure he doesn't kill himself among other things.)
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Jan 3, 2005 17:18:08 GMT -5
Post by Vivian Astley on Jan 3, 2005 17:18:08 GMT -5
"There's a small problem with your plan."
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Jan 3, 2005 17:22:40 GMT -5
Post by Jeffrey on Jan 3, 2005 17:22:40 GMT -5
Zack looked up from his brooding. "And what might that be?"
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Jan 3, 2005 17:32:09 GMT -5
Post by Vivian Astley on Jan 3, 2005 17:32:09 GMT -5
"Where are we going to get a time turner?"
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Jan 3, 2005 17:42:34 GMT -5
Post by Jeffrey on Jan 3, 2005 17:42:34 GMT -5
"You're the headmistress, don't you have one?"
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Jan 4, 2005 15:07:33 GMT -5
Post by Vivian Astley on Jan 4, 2005 15:07:33 GMT -5
"No, they're ministry regulated. If I wanted to get one I'd have to fill out about a bizzilion forms on why I need one in the first place." She sighed. "How did Dumbledore ever manage to put up with them?"
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Dinner
Jan 4, 2005 15:30:02 GMT -5
Post by Jeffrey on Jan 4, 2005 15:30:02 GMT -5
(... you coulda just said you didn't wanna write that whole bit about the door and the angst instead of shooting me down after all this... but you've gotta come up with why zack angsts now.)
Zack set his jaw, refusing to say anything. He could feel his eyes burning from a lack of sleep and a want of crying. It was fucking hopeless. All of it.
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Jan 4, 2005 15:35:28 GMT -5
Post by Vivian Astley on Jan 4, 2005 15:35:28 GMT -5
(i have no ideas and why does he need to angst?)
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Jan 4, 2005 15:51:31 GMT -5
Post by Jeffrey on Jan 4, 2005 15:51:31 GMT -5
(... weren't we just discussing how in the heck he was supposed to get from kinda happy in dinner to EFFING BLOODY DEPRESSED AT THE VERY END? *twitch* now you get to suggest how he angsts and gosh darn it, it better be at least as good as my idea. i refuse to write a whole action/spy novella that involves them stealing one from the ministry, just as i refuse to have them wait a whole fricken year for the ending to happen due to stupid burocracy, as the ending should have happened tons sooner. so, you make him angst. now. but it's got to be something he holds inside until the next morning in the tl)
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